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| evo8 |
a housey one that i started yesterday evening, cant remember the last time i did a track like this
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| Trancelover03591 |
I doubt very many people on TA like the genre of this track but if anyone has any feedback on how I can improve I appreciate it:
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| MSZ |
| Sounds really promising evo hit me up when u finish it. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
a housey one that i started yesterday evening, cant remember the last time i did a track like this
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Great start as usual. |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Trancelover03591
I doubt very many people on TA like the genre of this track but if anyone has any feedback on how I can improve I appreciate it:
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to my ears the production is pretty spot on in terms of mixing and space - i think you could do much better music wise just my 2c ;) |
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| MauroSanches |
| quote: | Originally posted by Trancelover03591
I doubt very many people on TA like the genre of this track but if anyone has any feedback on how I can improve I appreciate it:
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Hey there,
Nice energy! I just think some drum parts are too dry, like that first kick. I'd add some reverb, but not much to give it some warmth and dimension. That's just my opinion, it's a good track. |
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| MauroSanches |
Hey everyone,
I'm new to this forum and to producing EDM but I've been writing and recording Rock, Blues, World and Jazz for some years now. I don't really know the genre of this track but this almost translates my vibe on that that day.
Cheers.
http://soundcloud.com/mauro-sanches/trip-to-the-void |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by MauroSanches
Hey everyone,
I'm new to this forum and to producing EDM but I've been writing and recording Rock, Blues, World and Jazz for some years now. I don't really know the genre of this track but this almost translates my vibe on that that day.
Cheers.
http://soundcloud.com/mauro-sanches/trip-to-the-void |
overall it sounded slightly harsh/fatiguing to my ears - might need some eq here and there |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by MSZ
Sounds really promising evo hit me up when u finish it. |
Check PMs....... |
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| Juan Paulino |
Bam, new track i'm working on.
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| evo8 |
pretty good Juan, i like the stabs and stuff that comes in as the track progresses
Not sure on the kick, would like it to thump a bit more maybe? Also try not dropping the kick out in that first breakdown, maybe just highpass a bit instead, so the energy is retained, you can always drop it out later
nice overall though, even if im not into that sound anymore |
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| evo8 |
final one for the weekend, hope to work on this tomorrow some more
not sure on the kick, may try changing it (hate that)
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