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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 492)
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Appreciate your comment man :) - any suggestion what memorable element/s would you like to hear in this WIP?
Cheers,
Darek |
I don't know Darek, it sounds nice and everything but it's like i already heard dozens of tracks like that
Here's an idea (for a track, not saying there are memorable elements in it)
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| MSZ |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Going back to your WIP - how wide is your bass, did you freq shift some of those freq?
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whats freq shifting? dont think I have anything that does that except maybe the vocoder. its probably pretty wide, I dont mono stuff. |
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| SystematicX1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by MSZ
I dont mono stuff. |
o.O |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
What happened man - a jazzy vibe you are working on lol - net bad at all, just need more theme development, maybe a piano or synth going with some catchy melody and at least one break with chords changes to add some variation and attractiveness ;)
Also noted that your levels are more set and mixing is improved quite a bit.
Darek
Here is my another chillout WIP
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I enjoyed the synths and sounds all but feel the drums aren't Human enough, and they sound a bit lumpy and basic. You get some great synth pluks. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Here's an idea (for a track, not saying there are memorable elements in it)
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For me your nicest sound yet, a lovely piece, finish it
What reverb are you using I love how it sounds |
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| Richard Butler |
Any crits - is it quiet? Thx guys
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
For me your nicest sound yet, a lovely piece, finish it
What reverb are you using I love how it sounds |
Thanks, will try. I'm using fl reverb 2, comes with fl studio.
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
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It seems to quiet. Kick is to powerful? I like the idea, it gets a bit samey after while for me, maybe needs some cutting or more work on the arrangement. |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Any crits - is it quiet? Thx guys
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This may be great track man but your dynamics and sound level is not letting this production shine the most - don't know if this will help Richard.
Darek |
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| gordan100 |
Anyone like the destroyed vocal sample after 2:08?
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Anyone like the destroyed vocal sample after 2:08?
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Couple of things to consider Gordan, one is this buzzing noise almost from the beginning which is unnecessary (in my opinion), second is your vocal and I agree should be change to something more suitable for this type of vibe - my $0.02
Darek |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Couple of things to consider Gordan, one is this buzzing noise almost from the beginning which is unnecessary (in my opinion), second is your vocal and I agree should be change to something more suitable for this type of vibe - my $0.02
Darek |
Thanks for listening Darek, yeah maybe i should get rid of that buzz on bass. I still kinda like the vocal, i'll check it again in the morning. |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Thanks for listening Darek, yeah maybe i should get rid of that buzz on bass. I still kinda like the vocal, i'll check it again in the morning. |
But overall quality of your WIP is much more stable and dynamic - it is getting better and better ;)
Darek |
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